I kept my pitch very similar to the original version. some of the feedback i received was that the idea was very innovative and the liked how i made it relevant. some of the feedback i received was that they provided me with background info on the high heel to state the importance of this need for women and how long its been a problem. i also received a question for how it would be made or implemented. so in my second attempt i tried to maintain my level of comfort in my tone and delivery as well as my eagerness about the product. i also even when adding in these new info and changes i tried to stay as close to the 60 secs as i could.
As someone who really enjoys wearing heels but sometimes doesn't simply because my feet are still too sore and blistered from wearing heels the night before, I think that this is a wonderful idea. I have bought "Fast Flats" to keep in my purse for when I can't bear my heels any longer, but in actuality I never think to bring them with me, nor do I have the space for them in my small crossbody. Also, they are really more like house slippers and are unrealistic to put on for the outdoors. If I knew that I could compress my heels whenever my feet began to hurt, I would not be so concerned about putting on heels for the evening. Nice pitch overall and great job at identifying a need and creating a solution!
If you would like to check out my pitch as well, here is the link: http://marissaent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-2-bus-y-4-u.html
Well obviously, as a male, I am not in the market for snap-off heels. However, you do have a large market that you could go after with this idea, from businesswomen, to flight attendants, etc. It is a very smart idea that a lot of women would love. I think they should be relatively good looking that women would want to buy them. Also, with your pitch, I liked the tone and dynamism of your delivery, however I think you spent more time on the problem and not enough on the solution, so I think you should even it out a bit more. Other than that, good work. Here is the link to my post http://stefanent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Maria, I really like your idea. I were heels whenever I go out and I always bring flats in my car because walking in heels is a lot of work. By the time you get out of wherever you’re going you just want to take them off. You also don’t want t wear them any more hours than you have to. I like that you want to make sure that they are designer as well because most women like designer shoes and those are the ones that hurt the worst Check mine out: http://bridgettdavis85.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-week-7.html
Maria,
ReplyDeleteAs someone who really enjoys wearing heels but sometimes doesn't simply because my feet are still too sore and blistered from wearing heels the night before, I think that this is a wonderful idea. I have bought "Fast Flats" to keep in my purse for when I can't bear my heels any longer, but in actuality I never think to bring them with me, nor do I have the space for them in my small crossbody. Also, they are really more like house slippers and are unrealistic to put on for the outdoors. If I knew that I could compress my heels whenever my feet began to hurt, I would not be so concerned about putting on heels for the evening. Nice pitch overall and great job at identifying a need and creating a solution!
If you would like to check out my pitch as well, here is the link: http://marissaent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-2-bus-y-4-u.html
Best of luck!
Marissa
Well obviously, as a male, I am not in the market for snap-off heels. However, you do have a large market that you could go after with this idea, from businesswomen, to flight attendants, etc. It is a very smart idea that a lot of women would love. I think they should be relatively good looking that women would want to buy them. Also, with your pitch, I liked the tone and dynamism of your delivery, however I think you spent more time on the problem and not enough on the solution, so I think you should even it out a bit more. Other than that, good work. Here is the link to my post http://stefanent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteHi Maria,
ReplyDeleteI really like your idea. I were heels whenever I go out and I always bring flats in my car because walking in heels is a lot of work. By the time you get out of wherever you’re going you just want to take them off. You also don’t want t wear them any more hours than you have to. I like that you want to make sure that they are designer as well because most women like designer shoes and those are the ones that hurt the worst
Check mine out:
http://bridgettdavis85.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-week-7.html