I kept the overall same style of my pitch form the last assignment. i focused this time as establishing my creditably by saying some of my past experiences and positions i've help that helped me think of a solution to this problem. i received a lot of great criticism. most people said that they loved the idea and had a great market. i tried to tackle all of the issues such has keeping this new heel fashionable, i also wanted to make them easy to use and contain so i would be solving one issue and presenting another. one of the feedback i received that i didn't focus so much on the solution. this was hard for me because i simply presenting an idea and explaining how it works. the only way i saw that i could focus more was to explain how it would be made and distributed however i felt this strays from the purpose of a pitch. i think i was able to take the criticisms from both my first and second try and encompass them into this final video.
Hello Maria,
ReplyDeleteI think your pitch was great! I really liked how your voice elevated in certain areas, it made everything sound the opposite of monotone. It is great how you announced your credibility, this allows the viewer to believe in you and lets them know that you are capable of following through with your business pitch. Overall, i love your idea and you have a great market ahead of you. If you would like to view my elevator pitch, you can go to the following link: http://ent3003img.blogspot.com
Hey there. You did a great job on this assignment. I thought your idea was pretty interesting. I am a guy so I don’t really encounter this issue, but I think your product would definitely solve this problem. One thing I was a little confused about… does your product convert current shoes to do this or would it be its own shoe? Also if you have some free time, please check out my Elevator Pitch 3 at this link: http://parkeruf.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html
ReplyDeleteLoved your pitch! You could really hear the passion in everything you said. Your idea definently has a huge market and I haven't really heard of anything that similar to it before. Here is a link to my blogpost!! http://bonanientrepreneurship.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch.html
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